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IELTS Essay: Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to priso...

Prompt

Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released. Why is this the case? What can be done to solve this problem?

#recidivism#rehabilitation_failure#prison_conditions#reentry_barriers#post_release_support

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Band 7 → 9 — Band 7 explains causes and lists interventions; Band 9 analyzes whether prison exacerbates reoffending and argues reentry infrastructure (housing, employment pathways) is more effective than extended incarceration.

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Key concepts in this essay

Root causes: employment barriers, housing insecurity, community reintegration challenges, gang/family pressure
Prison as criminalization breeding ground vs. opportunity for rehabilitation
Substance abuse and mental health as drivers of reoffending
Informal reentry support vs. formal rehabilitation programs—evidence of what works
Recidivism reduction through mentorship, job training, family stability

Pitfalls the model essay avoids

Attributing recidivism solely to personal failure ('bad character') without examining systemic causes (criminal record stigma, lack of employment support, family estrangement)
Offering simplistic solutions (harsher sentencing, tighter monitoring) without evidence they reduce recidivism
Failing to distinguish between different types of reoffending (survival crime, gang coercion, substance abuse relapse)

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