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IELTS Essay: Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments s...

Prompt

Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statements?

#public health#environmental pollution#housing conditions#disease prevention#government intervention

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Band 7 → 9 — Band 7 acknowledges both environmental and individual factors, while Band 9 articulates a sophisticated hierarchy of health determinants and weighs the realistic capacity of government intervention against lifestyle complexity.

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Key concepts in this essay

environmental determinants of health
socioeconomic factors in disease prevention
government responsibility vs. individual agency
preventive vs. curative healthcare approaches
scale and prioritization of interventions

Pitfalls the model essay avoids

Treating pollution and housing as equally important without considering which has greater health impact
Neglecting individual lifestyle factors (diet, exercise) in preventing illness
Failing to discuss cost-effectiveness or feasibility of large-scale environmental remediation

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