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IELTS Essay: Some people say that it is the responsibility for the individuals to save mon...

Prompt

Some people say that it is the responsibility for the individuals to save money for their own care when they retire. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#retirement_planning#personal_responsibility#state_pension#financial_security#intergenerational_support

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Band 7 → 9 — Band 7 balances individual autonomy with practical limitations; Band 9 argues for mixed systems given income inequality and shows why pure individual responsibility fails.

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Key concepts in this essay

savings_capacity
longevity_risk
inflation_protection
inequality
state_safety_net

Pitfalls the model essay avoids

Ignoring capacity constraints (low-wage workers cannot save much)
Overlooking longevity risk and inflation that individuals cannot mitigate alone
Presenting individual vs. state responsibility as binary rather than shared

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