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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Answer Essay: Gap Year

Prompt

After graduation many students take a year to travel. Some think that it would be more useful to work for a year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#gap year#post-graduation experience#work experience#maturation#life planning

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Band 7 → 9 — Band 7 presents trade-offs between travel and work; Band 9 integrates career economics with personal development, acknowledging context (e.g., field-specific hiring practices, socioeconomic constraints).

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Key concepts in this essay

Career momentum and starting salary effects
Personal development and self-knowledge
Financial literacy and independence
Global perspective and cultural awareness

Pitfalls the model essay avoids

Ignoring opportunity costs of both travel and work (earnings, career progression, skill development differ)
Making unsupported claims about personal growth without specifying mechanisms
Treating all gap year activities and all jobs as equivalent

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