Supermarkets and Global Food Production
Prompt
In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Prompt
In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Ready?
Write this essay in 40 minutes
Band 7 → 9 — Band 7 identifies clear benefits (choice, price) and drawbacks (transportation, environment) separately, while Band 9 reveals the complexity—that global systems solve food security problems for many while creating new environmental costs, requiring nuanced trade-off analysis.
Thesis
Whilst global food distribution through supermarkets provides consumer choice and economic opportunities, the development is predominantly negative due to environmental degradation from transportation, agricultural exploitation, and undermining of local food systems.
Body paragraph 1
Global food networks offer consumer benefits including dietary variety and year-round availability
e.g. Northern European consumers can purchase fresh tropical fruits during winter months, enhancing dietary diversity
Body paragraph 2
However, environmental and social costs substantially outweigh consumer benefits
e.g. Strawberries shipped 8,000 miles produce carbon equivalent exceeding local seasonal alternatives by hundreds of percent
Counter-argument
Global food trade provides affordable nutrition for developing nations where local agriculture proves inadequate
Conclusion
Acknowledge trade benefits while emphasizing environmental sustainability priorities; advocate for localized food systems
Word count: 250 words·Target: 250+ words for Task 2
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