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Children on Their Phones

Prompt

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

#smartphone addiction#social media#child development#attention span#mental health#parental control

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Band 7 → 9 — Band 7 identifies causes (social media, design, entertainment) and negative impacts (addiction, attention), while Band 9 examines the systemic factors—why smartphones fill a void (social isolation, limited outdoor space, parental stress) and questions whether the phone is the problem or a symptom.

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Key concepts in this essay

dopamine reward cycles
peer pressure and FOMO
mental health in digital age
digital divide
parental responsibility vs device responsibility

Pitfalls the model essay avoids

Assuming addiction is purely about phone design without examining why children are drawn to them (social pressure, lack of alternatives)
Treating screen time as inherently harmful without distinguishing between uses (learning vs gaming)
Not acknowledging that some parents use phones as childcare due to economic constraints

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