Advertising New Products and Marketing Strategy
Prompt
In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Prompt
In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
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Write this essay in 40 minutes
Band 7 → 9 — Band 7 explains that businesses highlight newness to attract buyers and evaluates as positive (innovation) or negative (unnecessary), while Band 9 distinguishes between legitimate product improvement (genuine newness) and cosmetic novelty marketing, examining how the strategy both drives innovation and enables wasteful consumption.
Thesis
While the emphasis on novelty reflects genuine competitive dynamics and consumer preferences, I contend this trend presents predominantly negative consequences, promoting wasteful consumption, premature obsolescence, and diminished product durability.
Body paragraph 1
Multiple commercial and psychological factors explain businesses' emphasis on product novelty.
e.g. Smartphone manufacturers emphasize incremental innovations (marginally improved cameras, processors) to justify annual upgrades despite minimal functional improvements.
Body paragraph 2
However, this orientation generates substantial societal disadvantages.
e.g. Electronics designed for programmed obsolescence create exponential e-waste accumulation, depleting rare minerals and increasing toxic exposure.
Counter-argument
Some argue that novelty emphasis drives genuine technological progress benefiting society.
Conclusion
Acknowledge legitimacy of innovation while emphasizing need for sustainable consumption paradigms prioritizing durability and longevity over perpetual newness.
Word count: 247 words·Target: 250+ words for Task 2
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